I'm really into this book, but writing this kind of storyline in a romance requires a deft hand and I'm not convinced Kat Martin is doing that great a job of it yet. Six years ago the hero Ben's daughter, Molly, was kidnapped from in front of their home. Now, Autumn, the heroine, has been dreaming of her and thinks she's alive. It is a really serious story. So it's very jarring and awkward to go right from a discussion of Molly to Ben getting aroused and hard by Autumn. In a story like this I feel like that sort of thing needs to be toned way the hell down, or completely separated from the more serious aspects of the story.
Also, I really don't understand where the summit enters into this.
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